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Part two of the art trade with :iconkastemel:. The aftermath of Gloria's mom's cooking. Meg seems to be noticing the effects. Guess she's going belt shopping.

Again, scanner is bad. May color. Critique appreciated.

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:iconthefutureisnow2000:
Each drawing you do gets better and more refined. You're able to do a natural cartoonish but realistic picture so well that I hardly know where to start. Maybe the best part of the picture is her facial expression and the nuanced emotion it conveys. (I'm excluding her belly when I saw "best part" of course.) You're able to tell a whole story with the details -- the pictures on the wall showing what I assume to be her gradual gain, the missing doughnuts, the casual clothes and the remote -- transforming what would simply be a great picture into a great visual story.

So yeah: pretty damn good picture.
:iconlovetehfat:
This is one of those pictures where the line between blunt realism and cartoonishness just disappears because of artist skill. I love her overall shape. Her breasts, belly, thick arms and legs have a certain unity in look. Even the pose is part of the unified idea. The tapering of her arms/legs is gorgeous. The only "goof" I can detect is a nearly impossible distance between her two legs (without them being actually spread out; in the picture, they appear exactly perpendicular to one another...). Then again, maybe she has impossibly wide hips...anyway, great work and I can't wait to see it colored!
:iconzenidiot-comics:
crap, this is similar to what's going to happen in my comic, lol.

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:iconmastertoymaker:
Her expression and posture from the waist (whatever's left of it) is very nice, I really liek the way that she's taking it all in with such a simple look on her face. Like :iconlovetehfat: said, her legs are a little off.

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:iconwolfwood897:
I love her face, definatly an amazing picture!

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:iconzenidiot-comics:
heh, I just noticed the blunt title... lol.

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:iconinternetrage:
you got a love a girl thats to big for a belt, great wrok

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:iconfatlina:
nice level of detail, especially in the background. :D
:iconmoonvamp:
Nice amount of detail, and great execution of both her expression and posture. :)

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